Question

【写作内容】

下面是一场健康讲座的内容简介，请你用英语写一篇短文介绍讲座情况。

时间：上个月

演讲者：健康专家张教授

主题：久坐伤身

现状：随着电视电脑的发展，人们坐着的时间超过历史上任何时期

久坐的危害：颈痛，背痛，肥胖，心脏病，死亡

专家建议：学生，办公室工作者等久坐人群应养成好习惯：步行或骑自行车上学上班，不开车；走楼梯，不坐电梯；打电话时站立；学生下课期间要起身活动。

【写作要求】

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Last month I attended a lecture delivered by Professor Zhang, a health expert, with the theme of “sitting for too long is bad for people’s health”. From the lecture I learned that with the development of TV and computers, people today sit a lot more than ever before in history, which has a bad effect on their health. Not only can this habit make your neck or back ache, but it may also make you fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death. To prevent these problems from happening, Professor Zhang suggested that those who sit too much, such as students and office workers, should form some good habits in life, such as going to school or work on foot or by bike rather than by car, taking the stairs instead of the elevator and standing while talking on the phone. He particularly reminded us that we students should stand up to do some activities during break time at school.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求写一篇英语短文，介绍健康讲座的相关情况。注意只能使用5个句子来表达全部的内容；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：

范文涵盖了所有要点内容，并进行了适当的拓展；范文还使用了宾语从句、非谓语动词等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：过去分词作定语delivered by Professor Zhang；不定式表目的to prevent these problems from happening；宾语从句①that with the development of TV and computers, people today sit a lot more than ever before，②that those who sit too much should form some good habits in life，③that we students should stand up to do some activities；定语从句①which has a bad effect on their health，②who sit too much；倒装Not only can this habit make your neck or back ache, but it may also make you fat等，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了more than, have an effect on, prevent...from, such as, not only...but also, rather than, instead of等固定短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

考点：材料作文