Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的美国笔友David最近在学汉语，他给你发来一封电子邮件讲述他对学习汉语的浓厚兴趣，但是他在学习汉语的过程中常常因为犯错误而懊恼。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。

写作要点：1. 鼓励他继续努力，正确看待错误；

2. 给他提出一些学好汉语的建议（至少两条）；

3. 邀请他来中国玩。

注意：1. 词数120左右；

2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称；

Dear David;

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

I’m glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning Chinese. It is well known that Chinese is difficult to learn. One can’t avoid making a mistake when learning a foreign language.

Here are some tips on how to learn Chinese. First, don’t be afraid to make mistakes. Making mistakes is a good way to learn how to speak right. Second, if you know a Chinese friend, ask him or her to practice with you. Third, you should spend more time practicing listening to and speaking Chinese frequently.

I wish you success in learning Chinese. I am expecting to hear from you. At last, you are welcome to China.

【解析】本文属于提纲类短文，同时也属于应用文中的通知。使用第一人称和一般现在时为主。要点：1. 鼓励他继续努力，正确看待错误；2. 给他提出一些学好汉语的建议（至少两条）；3. 邀请他来中国玩。提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体。同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点。

【范文亮点】：本文的亮点在于高级词汇的使用，如wish you success in，expect to hear from，are welcome to；另外高级句式的使用也较多，如. It is well known that Chinese is difficult tolearn.主语从句用法。Making mistakes is a good way to learn how to speak right.中的doing做主语等。