题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你所在的班级决定成立“大乐英语俱乐部”。请你给你校的外教John写封信,邀请他加入该俱乐部,要点如下:
1、成立俱乐部的目的。
2、活动时间、地点和内容。
3、邀请加入。
注意:1、词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
大乐英语俱乐部: Big Fun English Club
Dear John,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear John,
To arouse our interest in English learning and provide a platform for us to learn and practise using English, our class has decided to set up Big Fun English Club.
We’ll gather in our classroom after school every Saturday, when a variety of activities will be organized, such as watching English movies, singing English songs, putting on English plays, having debates in English and so on.
On behalf of our class, I’m much honored to warmly invite you to join us. I firmly believe that your appearance in our club will definitely inspire us all to become more interested in learning and using English and therefore work harder at English. We’ll be expecting you in our class at 5:00pm this Saturday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,内容是要给外教写信,邀请他来参加俱乐部。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容(1. 时间:2. 地点;3. 活动安排。)进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意写信格式。
【亮点说明】本文用时间、地点、事件的先后顺序使文章层次分明,结构紧凑,语言连贯,同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如宾语从句I firmly believe that your appearance in our club will definitely inspire us all to become more interested in learning and using English and therefore work harder at English. 常用短语on behalf of等。