题目内容
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Two years ago, when I was an oversea student, I worked early mornings and late nights to pay for my school fees.
One day, I was seriously ill with a very high fever. I had stayed at home for a few days, and I had run out of food. Because I had been in this town just for a short time, I also had no friends nearby who could help. So I went out to get some food. I would have gone to the supermarket, but on this occasion, I went into a small store because it was closer.
I picked up a few items. When I handed them to the shopkeeper, she said, “You are unwell.” “Yes,” I nodded.
She pointed at the salami and bread I was buying and offered, “I can make you a sandwich, so you don’t have to do it yourself’. So, she made the sandwich and asked me to wait a moment. She went in the back room and returned with a bowl of hot soup.
“It will warm you up,” she said with a genuine smile.
What really warmed me up was not the soup, but her kindness. It made me want to be as kind as the shopkeeper who had been kind to me.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个词概括上文的要点;
2. 用约120个词以“善举的影响”为话题谈谈你的想法,内容包括:
(1)上文使你回忆起曾经有谁的爱心举动使你感到温暖;
(2)在感到温暖之余,你是否受到这个举动的影响,并把爱心传递下去?为什么?
(3)今后,你将如何继续传递爱心?
【写作要求】
1. 你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
When the author, an oversea student, was badly ill, a shopkeeper made him/her a sandwich and offered hot soup. Feeling warm with her kindness, the author decided to be as kind as her.
The passage reminds me of Miss Chen, my teacher of chemistry, she just encouraged me not to give up. She even did everything to ease my anxiety.
It sounds like nothing big, but her act did make me feel warm. With such a teacher, there is no doubt that I will act as her in future. As long as I do so, others can also feel the kindness of Miss Chen.
In the future, I will keep kindness in mind. If possible, I will try to become a youth volunteer offering help to others. No matter how hard it is, I will do my best to help those in need.
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于读写任务写作,动笔前,一定要认真阅读原文,并理解内容。认真看清题目要求,这篇书面表达给了一段材料:先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容,要求有很高的概括提炼的能力,要抓住文章的主题,再以约120个词写一篇短文,按照要点去表达,不能有遗漏,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮点说明】这篇范文要点全面,语言精炼,简单句和复杂句交叉使用:With such a teacher, there is no doubt that I will act as her in future.这句话用了同位语从句, Feeling warm with her kindness, the author decided to be as kind as her.这句话使用了现在分词做状语,As long as I do so, others can also feel the kindness of Miss Chen.这句话使用了条件状语从句,If possible, I will try to become a youth volunteer offering help to others. 这句话使用了省略句,No matter how hard it is, I will do my best to help those in need.这句话用了让步状语从句。
考点:考查读写任务写作