Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

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I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds∧ view      quarrel with sb.

              特指高三学生必须充分利用每一分钟这个观点，故加the.

                                                                    the

that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It

                         full   make full use of full形容词修饰名词use. 

seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about

       her 这是母亲的观点，所以应该是to her.                                      be unable为形容词，需加be动词才能作谓语。

my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion,

                                 eyes  眼睛为一双，故用eyes

watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know       work   hard work中work为不可数名词      watching     动名词短语作主语                              

what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.                            at home and abroad 在国内外

    has   前面是it is important…，故用现在完成时。

【解析】如上