Question

6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或
修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    Last weekend my sister went to the supermarket to buy some groceries．Three hours ago，with full bags of goods in both hands，she headed for nearby bus stop，tired and hungry．She was waiting for the bus while it began to rain．After what seemed ages，came a bus，crowded of passengers．When it was her turn to getting on the bus，someone said，"Sorry，no more rooms．"Quite disappointed，my sister had to take a taxi．Half way home，however，the taxi broke out．Hardly had he got out of the taxi when a bus passed by．It was empty，but she had been missed it!What an unluckily day!

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要讲述了作者的妹妹去超市购物后回家路上的经历．上个周末，作者的妹妹去超市购物，三个小时后，她两手提满了袋子，朝着附近的车站去，又累又饿，在她等车的时候，天开始下雨，好像过了很长时间，车终于来了，车上挤满了乘客．当轮到她上车的时候，有人说，"对不起，没有空间了．"妹妹感到很失望，于是打的，但是半路上出租车抛锚了，妹妹一下车，就有一辆公共汽车经过，上面是空的，但可惜的是，有错过了．

解答 Last weekend my sister went to the supermarket to buy some groceries．Three hours 
 
ago，with full bags of goods in both hands，she headed for/\nearby bus stop，tired and
later                                                                            a/the
hungry．She was waiting for the bus while it began to rain．After what seemed ages，
                                                     when
came a bus，crowded of passengers．When it was her turn to gettingon the bus，
                             with                                                       get
 someone said，"Sorry，no more rooms．"Quite disappointed，my sister had to take a
                                                 room
taxi．Half way home，however，the taxi broke out．Hardly had hegot out of the taxi
                                                                     down                 she
when a bus passed by．It was empty，but she had been missed it!What an unluckily 
                                                                         去掉                            unlucky
day!
1．ago--later 考查副词．文中表示购物后回家，所以应该是三小时之后，应该用later．
2．nearby  前面加a/the 考查冠词．stop是车站的意思，是可数名词单数形式，应该用冠词a/the．
3．while--when 考查连词．表示就在此时，用when，while后面接持续性动词．
4．of--with 考查介词搭配．crowded with是固定搭配．
5．getting--get 考查动词不定式．It is one's turn to do sth，所以这里应该用to get．
6．rooms--room 考查名词单复数．room在文中是"空间"的意思，是不可数名词，所以不能用复数形式．
7．out--down 考查动词短语搭配．break down表示抛锚，出故障．
8．he--she 考查人称代词．文中讲的是妹妹，所以用she．
9．去掉been 考查谓语动词的语态．妹妹已经错过了公交车，应该是主动关系，所以用主动语态，去掉been．
10．unluckily--unlucky 考查形容词．修饰名词用形容词．

点评 改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．