Question

【题目】我校决心建设“节约型校园”，请结合我校用水、用电、用纸的情况。以 “How to Build an Economized Campus”为题，写一篇作文，谈谈自己的想法。

文章须包括以下要点：

（1）节电：及时关闭电灯、电脑等用电设备

（2）节水：随手关闭水龙头（tap）；废水利用

（3）节纸：纸张再利用

补充：自己日常生活所感所为

注意：1.词数：100—120字，短文标题，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

2.内容可适当发挥，注意行文贯通。

How to Build an Economized Campus

Our school is aiming to build an economized campus. It is everybody’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal.

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Build an Economized Campus

Our government is aiming to build an economized campus. It is everybody’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal.

Recently, the statistics in the report of one certain school in two school terms suggests that the expenses of electricity, water and paper are surprisingly large and growing rapidly, which draws our attention.

As a common member of society, we must keep the following points in our minds. Firstly, make sure that the lights and all the other electric facilities are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room. Secondly, try to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used and the wide water can be reused for more purposes before being thrown into sewers. Thirdly, save paper as much as possible in our everyday life. It is even better to reuse it.

In a word, if we pay much attention to our everyday behavior and take actions to reduce waste, we can make contributions to an economized campus.

【解析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇日常感悟。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一篇日常感悟：我校决心建设“节约型校园”，请结合我校用水、用电、用纸的情况。以 “How to Build an Economized Campus”为题，写一篇作文，谈谈自己的想法。文章须包括以下要点：（1）节电：及时关闭电灯、电脑等用电设备（2）节水：随手关闭水龙头（tap）；废水利用（3）节纸：纸张再利用。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：the expenses of electricity,（电的费用）；draws our attention.（引起某人的注意）；make sure(确保)；turned off（关掉）；In a word,（总而言之）；pay much attention to （关注）；take actions（采取行动）；make contributions to（为---做出贡献）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，鱼片连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。