Question

15．班级要开学习经验交流会，班长让你根据下面提示写一篇学习英语的经验的发言稿：课前预习；课堂活动；课后作业；其他学习方法（至少两项）．
注意：
1．文章开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
2．词数：120左右；
3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Boys and girls，
I feel honored to say something about learning English here．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇发言稿，介绍学习英语的经验．写作要点包括：1．课前预习；2．课堂活动；3．课后作业；4．其他学习方式．
写作时时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一和第三人称为主．
重要短语：feel honored to do （做某事觉得荣幸），preview the lessons（复习功课），make marks （作记号），listen to the teacher（听老师讲课），on time （准时），in one's spare time （在某人空闲时间），pay attention to  （注意…），write down （写下），keep sth in good order （使某事井井有条），learn sth by heart（背诵，记住…），May you+动词原形 （祝愿某人…）．
【高分句型】
1．In learning English，I think we should preview the lessons that the teacher will teach before class，making marks where we have questions．
这里是现在分词making作伴随状语，主句为I think we should preview the lessons that the teacher will teach before class，主句的主语为I，与所给动词make存在逻辑上的主动关系．
2．We should write down what the teacher have taught us and keep the notes in good order．
这里是由what引导的宾语从句，在整个句子中作动词write down的宾语，宾语从句中使用陈述句语序，主语为the teacher 谓语动词为 have taught，宾语为us．
3．When we have problems in learning English，we must turn to the teacher for help．
这里是由when引导的时间状语从句，主句为we must turn to the teacher for help．

解答 Boys and girls，
I feel honored to say something about learningEnglish here．In learning English，I think we should preview the lessons that the teacher willteach before class，making marks where we have questions．【高分句型】（课前预习）And in class，we should listen to theteacher carefully．（课堂活动）After class，it is better to finish our homework on time．（课后作业）
   In our spare time，we must pay attention to our notes．We should write down whatthe teacher have taught us and keep the notes in good order．【高分句型】
   When we have problems in learning English，we must turn to the teacherfor help．【高分句型】It is very useful to learn good sentences by heart．It is also important to readaloud and read more English articles．（其他学习方法）
   May you study well．
   That's all．Thank you．

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．