题目内容
【题目】假定你叫李华。一直喜欢唱歌,最近组建了自己的音乐俱乐部。你的笔友David很想了解一下有关情况,请给他回一邮件。
内容包括:
1. 俱乐部情况(名称、组建时间、活动频率等);
2. 俱乐部带来的好处(交友、放松、积极面对人生等);
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头和结尾均已给出(不计入总词数);
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I am pleased to share with you some information about my music club.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I am pleased to share with you some Information about my music club.
My club, Dream Music Club, whose motto is "to sing for dreams", was formed one year ago. To realize the goal, we've been practicing every Friday night ever since and we stick to the plan. Also, every four weeks we'll hold singing competitions, and we do have fun.
Actually, as a music lover, I get a lot from running the club, which not only helps me make friends but get relaxed and hold a positive attitude toward life as well.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义给笔友David写一封邮件。
这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要为假定你叫李华。一直喜欢唱歌,最近组建了自己的音乐俱乐部。你的笔友David很想了解一下有关情况,请给他回一邮件。内容包括:
1. 俱乐部情况(名称、组建时间、活动频率等);2. 俱乐部带来的好处(交友、放松、积极面对人生等);我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合整个文章,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。