Question

13．假定你是李华，你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍．请你根据以下信息，向编辑介绍一位伟大的人物．
参考词汇：出版publish幽默的humorous
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear editor．
I'd like to introduce a great man to you．Mark Twain，an American man，was born in a poor family in the countryside on November 30，1835．He is known to the world as a great writer．Unluckily，his father died when he was 11 years old．However，he was always positive toward life．As a young man，he did different jobs，such as a worker and a reporter．He was fond of writing all the time．As a result，many novels were published in his life．He devoted himself to writing and died of an illness on April 21，1910．
Mark Twain who is a clever and humorous master will be remembered by the world forever．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Mark Twain，an American man，was born in a poor family in the countryside on November 30，1835
Mark Twain，美国人，出生在一个贫穷的家庭在1835年11月30日．
高分句型二：
Mark Twain who is a clever and humorous master will be remembered by the world forever．
Mark Twain是一个聪明幽默的大师会被世界永远记住．

解答 One possible version：
Dear editor，
I'd like to introduce a great man to you．
Mark Twain，an American man，was born in a poor family in the countryside on November 30，1835（高分句型一）．He is known to the world as a great writer．Unluckily，his father died when he was 11 years old．However，he was always positive toward life．As a young man，he did different jobs，such as a worker and a reporter．He was fond of writing all the time．As a result，many novels were published in his life．He devoted himself to writing and died of an illness on April 21，1910．
Mark Twain who is a clever and humorous master will be remembered by the world forever（高分句型二）．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．