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现在，电视机、收音机充斥着我们的生活，不少老师担心这会对学生造成影响．请你站在老师的立场上，谈谈电视机、收音机等对我们的影响．文章第一句已给出．

Many teachers worry about the effects of televisions on young people．

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例文： 　　Many teachers worry about the effects of televisions on young people．According to studies, any① children spend more time watching television than they spend in school．Because② so much viewing, children may not be③ develop the habit of read④ and the ability to enjoy themselves．No one worries much about the radio program⑤ young people listen to, although radios can be very noise⑥．Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials．On⑦ one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to⑧ want things that they don't real⑨ need． 修改： 　　①any→many或some根据复数children可确定应用many或some．any用于肯定句时，后接单数名词． 　　②because后加of because of后接名词或代词． 　　③去掉be develop是行为动词，不与动词be连用． 　　④read→reading of后接动名词作宾语． 　　⑤program→programs program是可数名词，要用复数形式． 　　⑥noise→noisy be后接形容词． 　　⑦On→In表示在某年要用介词in． 　　⑧去掉to make后接不带to的不定式作宾补． 　　⑨real→really要用副词修饰动词． 点评： 　　本文语意连贯，意思表达较清楚，文中虽出现了介词、词性等错误，但并不影响文意表达．