Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你校的校园网将在2017年11月24日为高三学生开通一个英语复习交流博客。请你写信给你的美国笔友John，介绍这个博客，内容包括：

1.开通博客的目的；

2.博客的内容；

3.欢迎John参加。

注意：1.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.字数100左右。

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John，

I’m glad to tell you that a blog intended for senior three students will be open on the website of our school on Nov 24，2017 in order to help us students to communicate better，improve our English and make good preparations for the coming university entrance exams．

The blog will serve as an open platform where we can do many things．First of all，we students can post our problems on it，then possible solutions will be given by our teachers and other students．Secondly，we can share learning experience to promote our study．Besides，we are free to take part in the weekly discussion．

I do believe the blog will be of great help to our English．You are welcome to join us and your useful advice on English learning will be highly appreciated．Looking forward to early reply．

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇书信类作文。一般书信作文都是围绕写信人找收信人有什么事或要求、传达什么讯息等内容展开的，所以在书信的开头考生要说清楚写信目的I’m glad to tell you that …；其次考生要根据题目给出的内容提示扩充题干或提纲1.开通博客的目的；

2.博客的内容；3.You are welcome to join us …；最后要表明自己很期待对方回信等．Looking forward to early reply．…。这样一篇结构完整的书信作文就轻松完成了。考生在成文时应注意：合理发挥想象力，使文章的表达自然，丰满。注意文章的人称：以第一人称为主。时态：一般现在时。范文中使用了大量高级词汇intended for， make good preparations for， serve as， are free to和句型，以提高文章的档次；恰当使用一些连词First of all、Besides、插入语，使文章表达自然，流畅。注意次数：80—120之间。

【范文亮点】①The blog will serve as an open platform where we can do many things.定语从句。②your useful advice on English learning will be highly appreciated.运用了被动语态结构。