Question

假设你将作为光明中学高三毕业生代表，请根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一个告别演讲:
1.感谢家人，朋友和老师。特别举例感谢某个老师（不用真名，一律使用Mr. Wang, 并写出原因。
2.回顾高中三年的生活。列举出你印象深刻的活动。3. 展望未来。
注意：开头与结尾已经给出，所写部分120字左右。
Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Guangming High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2014!
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Answer 1

Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Guangming High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2014! First, let me thank all our families and friends for their love and support on behalf of the graduates. I also want to thank our diligent teachers for guiding us through to this moment. My personal thanks to Mr Zheng, you got me through English when I had given up hope. Graduation is a time to go over enjoyable memories which have been made over the past three years. Many events become so vivid in my mind at this moment, military training, soccer and basketball games.
However, graduation is also a time to look forward to the future in front of us. No matter what you plan next, I hope you can go about it positively. Each of you will create your own unique path. Let’s remember the saying “Attitude determines altitude”. Please always keep a smile on your face.
Finally, best wishes to the Class of 2014. Thank you very much.

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。假设你将作为光明中学高三毕业生代表，请根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一个告别演讲:1.感谢家人，朋友和老师。特别举例感谢某个老师（不用真名，一律使用Mr. Wang, 并写出原因。2.回顾高中三年的生活。列举出你印象深刻的活动。3. 展望未来。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】Graduation is a time to go over enjoyable memories which have been made over the past three years.这里含有一个定语从句。