Question

【题目】阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Middle and high school days are both fun and busy. Students spend their days in class, listening to the interesting and sometimes boring words of the teacher. They spend the short breaks running, playing, and shouting happily before going back to the classroom again. But how should students spend their free time outside school?

In Western countries, it is common for students to have a part-time job after school and at weekends. Students can earn their own money and learn more about the “real world”. They enjoy the extra independence and money, and parents enjoy the quiet house. However, it seems that, in China, parents worry so much about their children’ studies that they would prefer to see their children spending most of their free time studying and preparing for all those exams.

It is natural for parents to feel that way, but I believe the answer lies in balance. Sometimes, Western school children work long hours after school to make money, and so they become too tired to listen in class or have no time for homework. But Chinese students spend so much time on their studies that all else becomes less important until they want that new MP4 player.

So, find a good and healthy balance! If you have a part-time job, you’ll be happy, and your parents will also be happy because you’re spending your hard-earned money and not theirs!

[写作内容]

1） 概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右；

2） 就“如何利用课余时间”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右:

a. 以自身为例，简述你平时是怎样打发课余时间的；

b. 你如何看待自己利用课余时间的方式；

c. 你的父母对你利用课余时间的态度及你的看法。

[写作要求]

你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。

Answer 1

【答案】

There is a great difference between the way high school students spend their free time, and the writer hopes to find a balance between studying and having fun.

What worries the writer is just what we students are confused about: can our “spare time” actually mean something “spare”?

Take me for example. Every day I have just 1 hour in the afternoon to do some sports. At weekends, I usually have lots of homework assigned by teachers to finish. Even if I want to do something else, I will often be stopped by my parents. Like many other parents, they just want me to study all the time until I am admitted to a famous university. As a result, I can’t control my “spare time” on my own! Looking around at my friends, I find I’m not alone in such a situation. What a boring life for us students!

I just don’t agree with my parents about their way of controlling my spare time. Yes, for us students, studying is the most important thing to do. But we can’t be separated from the outside world. Studying all the time, I’m afraid what we are learning can’t match the real world. I don’t want to depress my parents, of course; but I do think that we need to find a way to settle this problem.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，根据所给提纲，可分两部分来写，第一部分简述现象，第二部分表达自己的观点。第二部分又可按照所给要点分三点来写。考生需要发挥想象、展开思维，把文章内容写的具体、鲜活并且要有说服力。成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称；2.时态：灵活变换；3.文章的内容要点要齐全；4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制，120单词左右。7.不能使用原文语句。

【亮点说明】本文是按要求写文章，内容齐全，语言流畅，衔接紧密，使用高级句子。What worries the writer is just what we students are confused about在句中what分别引导主语从句和表语从句，起双重作用；Even if I want to do something else, I will often be stopped by my parents. Even if引导让步状语从句；Like many other parents, they just want me to study all the time until I am admitted to a famous university. Until引导时间状语从句；Looking around at my friends, I find I’m not alone in such a situation.现在分词作时间状语；What a boring life for us students! What引导的感叹句恰如其分；studying is the most important thing to do.动名词作主语，动词不定式作后置定语；另外，Take me for example，At weekends，As a result，for us students，But的运用为文章增色添彩。