Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华，你校以“弘扬中国文化，促进校际交流”为宗旨，将于 5 月 25—30 日在天津海河举行龙舟赛 。请根据以下内容，给姐妹学校剑桥中学

（Cambridge High School)校长写一封信，邀请他们的龙舟队参加比赛。

内容要点：

(1)写信目的

(2)活动时间、地点和意义 (3)回复时间：2017 年 5 月 10 日前 注意：

1.词数 100 左右；

2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好。

参考词汇：Dragon Boat Race 龙舟赛 Dragon Boat Festival 端午节

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear principal,

I am Li Hua, chaiman of the Student Union. I’m writing to invite your school to take part in our school’s upcoming Dragon Boat Race from May 25th to 30th on Haihe River in Tianjin.

The event is a fantastic opportunity for our schools to develop closer ties and to promote cultural exchange. The annual Dragon Boat Festival is one of China’s most important cultural events, in memory of the ancient poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself after being falsely accused of corruption. It will provide students the chance to learn from each other, improve their boating skills and promote friendship.

We know that Cambridge High School has an outstanding boating team and would love you to take part. We’d appreciate hearing from your reply before May 10th.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本题是邀请函类作文。话题是在天津海河举行龙舟赛，邀请姐妹学校参加。写作要点已给出，考生很容易理解写作内容和写作目的。因为本文是邀请别人参加比赛，所以这类邀请信的措辞要相对正式一些，语气要热情有礼。除了说明比赛具体信息之外，当然不能忘了表达希望对方能够参加的诚意；最后还要请收信人对发出的邀请做出反馈。

亮点：本文中使用了复合句。如：The annual Dragon Boat Festival is one of China’s most important cultural events, in memory of the ancient poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself after being falsely accused of corruption.，

在省略句中使用了非谓语…in memory of the ancient poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself after being falsely accused of corruption.

文中大量使用了动词不定式。如用不定式表目的的I’m writing to invite your school to take part in our school’s upcoming Dragon Boat Race和The event is a fantastic opportunity for our schools to develop closer ties and to promote cultural exchange。

用不定式作定语的，如It will provide students the chance to learn from each other

同时文章中使用了许多高级词汇。如a fantastic opportunity for our schools to develop closer ties and to promote cultural exchange；be falsely accused of corruption；provide students the chance to learn from each other；would love you to take part；would love you to take part。

总体来说本篇文章要点齐全，结构完整，目的明确，使用很多复句及非谓语。使用了许多的高级词汇也是本文的亮点。