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【题目】假如你是李华，最近你从报纸上看到一家外企公司招聘秘书的广告，请你根据下列要点提示给经理写一封应聘信。
1) 今年20岁，即将毕业于职业院校。主修经济管理。
2) 学习英语超过八年了，熟悉电脑操作；在过去曾任学生报的编辑，有写作和编辑经验；在校成绩优秀。
3) 性格外向，交际能力强。
要求：1) 内容要连贯、完整。
2) 叙述必须用第一人称。
3) 字数:100左右。
参考词汇：职业院校vocational school；主修 major in 经验experience 操作
operate
经济管理 business management
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your advertisement for the position as a secretary in the newspaper.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to your advertisement for the position as a secretary in the newspaper.

My name is Li Hua and I am twenty years old and I'm going to graduate from a vocational school. I major in business management. Besides, I've learned English for more than eight years and I am familiar with computer operation. In the last three years, I've been one of the editors of our student newspaper, which makes me experienced in writing and editing. I do well in my study and my scores are outstanding in my class.I am outing and good at communicating with others. I am sure that I will be qualified for secretary.

I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your company. I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份，给经理写一封应聘信，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1) 今年20岁，即将毕业于职业院校。主修经济管理；2) 学习英语超过八年了，熟悉电脑操作；在过去曾任学生报的编辑，有写作和编辑经验；在校成绩优秀；3) 性格外向，交际能力强。首先，考生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。