Question

【题目】假设你正在参加全省中学生演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。 内容包括：1.认为同学们不必为此烦恼 2.希望能够体谅父母的苦衷 3.建议与父母进行交流沟通

Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,

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Answer 1

【答案】Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,

Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries . I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it , but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble . They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them .If you don’t think you can talk to them , write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it

【解析】此文为演讲稿。注意演讲稿的格式和措辞。

写作步骤：

第一步：审题，抓要点。

要点有：1. 有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象，2.认为同学们不必为此烦恼3.希望能够体谅父母的苦衷 3.建议与父母进行交流沟通

第二步：人称：第一人称，时态：一般现在时

第三步：列提纲，起草

亮点分析：

多处使用复合句： Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries .（原因状语从句）

Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble . （宾语从句）

They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same .（宾语从句）

If you don’t think you can talk to them , write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it（条件状语从句）

2.使用连词，使文章更连贯。如as， but，and等。