Question

【题目】假设你是一中学生李华。近日，你的英语笔友John听说你们学校正在开展“建设节约型社会(Construction of an energy-saving society)”主题活动，发来邮件请你介绍一下你对活动的看法和建议。请你结合以下要点，用英语给John回复邮件。

1.不浪费粮食和纸张;

2.尽量不使用方便筷（disposable chopsticks)、塑料袋;

3.毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用;

4.其他建议（如绿色出行等）

5.只有我们共同努力……

注意:

1. 不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节;

2. 词数：120左右。开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数;

Dear John,

Glad to receive your E-mail.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John，

①Glad to receive your e-mail.

②As you know, there has been an activity of “Construction of an energy-saving society” in our school recently. ③I think it is of vital importance because our society is faced with the increasing danger of lack of energy. ④Many reasonable suggestions are given during the activity.

⑤In my opinion, there’re many things we can do. ⑥In our daily life, we shouldn’t waste any food or paper. ⑦It is also advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. ⑧Besides, I think the government should make it a rule that used textbooks should not be thrown away when we graduate from school, because most of the books are in good condition and can be recycled.

⑨Actually, there are quite a lot that we can easily do, for example, try to take buses or bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. ⑩Only with joint efforts can we help to construct an energy-saving society.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，内容是用英语给John回复邮件，介绍一下你对活动的看法和建议。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。

【亮点说明】本文层次分明，结构紧凑，语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如宾语从句I think it is of vital importance because our society is faced with the increasing danger of lack of energy主语从句It is also advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.倒装句Only with joint efforts can we help to construct an energy-saving society.等