题目内容

假设你叫李华,现在英国工作,你的朋友王平写信告诉你他打算赴英留学,想知道初到英国可能会遇到的困难。请你用英语给他写一封回信,信的内容应包括:
1. 可能会遇到的困难:语言方面的障碍、饮食的不习惯、想家、孤独等;
2. 鼓励他并表示愿意帮助他。
注意:1. 词数:100字左右。   
2. 信的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Ping,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here
in the UK. ____________________________________________________________________________
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
Yours,
Li Hua


Dear Wang Ping,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in UK. Now, I’d like to tell you something about it.
First, you may have problems about the language which you think you have learned so well. You may find it difficult to communicate with the natives, because many of them have a strong accent. Besides, you may not get used to the western food here or even hate to have it. What’s more, you may feel lonely and miss your family and friends, especially in the very beginning.
However, you needn’t worry about it. Several weeks later, you will get used to everything here and get to love the place, and I’ll also try my best to help you when necessary.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

解析试题分析:题目要求给朋友王平写一封回信,告诉他初到英国可能会遇到的困难有哪些,并提出愿意帮助他度过困难。题目是常见的书信作文,写作时,首先要注意书信的格式要正确,不能出现单词拼写、标点符号方面的错误。注意使用第一人称来写;注意时态、语法知识的灵活运用,不能出现语法错误。
【亮点说明】范文使用了较多的语法知识:固定句型I’d like to..., find it difficult to communicate with..., try my best to help you;定语从句which you think you have learned so well;原因状语从句because many of them have a strong accent;省略when necessary等,显示了较强的语法功底;
范文还注意使用First, Besides, What’s more, However等连接句子和上下文,做到了语意连贯、衔接紧密;
范文也使用了一些短语get used to;worry about等。
考点:书信类作文

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【写作内容】
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【写作要求】
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【评分标准】
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