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上周开始,老师和家长都要李明住校学习,而他却喜欢住在家里,双方各持己见。假设你是李明,请用英语把这个情况告诉给中学生英语报某栏目组,请求主持人给予建议。

老师和家长的理由
李明的理由
1.方便问问题;
2.晚自习时间更能保证;
3.培养独立生活的能力。
1.晚上有更多自习时间;
2. 学习内容可以自由支配。
……
注意:1.词数:120字左右;           2.信的开头已写好;
3.参考词句:住校board(v.);方便做…… It’s convenient to…;分歧disagreement
Dear Sir,
I’m a student of Senior 1. I am writing to ask you for some advice.                              
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
Yours,  
Li Ming 

Dear Sir,
I’m a student of Senior 1. I am writing to ask you for some advice.
Since last week, my parents and teachers have kept asking me to board in the school. They say it will be very convenient for me to ask questions whenever and wherever. Besides, they think boarding will make it possible to make full use of my night time, and that I can also develop the ability to look after myself.
However, I have my own thoughts. If staying at home in the evening, I will have more time to work at my lessons. At the same time, I can learn what I think I’m not good at. I really don’t know how to deal with the disagreement between us. Can you give me your advice?
Yours,
Li Ming

解析试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达. 平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点说明】范文结构清晰,语言流畅,多用词组和句型:make full use of充分利用,deal with处理, They say it will be very convenient for me to ask questions whenever and wherever. 这句话用了it做形式主语, they think boarding will make it possible to make full use of my night time, and that I can also develop the ability to look after myself.这句话用了it做形式宾语, If staying at home in the evening, I will have more time to work at my lessons. 这句话用了省略句,At the same time, I can learn what I think I’m not good at. 这句话用了宾语从句。还有范文还使用了Besides让文章更加连贯。
考点:考查提纲类书面表达

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阅读下面材料,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
On the morning after the rainstorm, a man was walking on the beach, enjoying the beautiful view of the nature. Suddenly, he found thousands of starfish(海星) trapped in the shallow puddles(水坑) on the beach. As the sun rose, the water in the puddles was disappearing and the starfish began to struggle for life desperately. However, they still had no hopes to go back to the sea not far away.
As the man continued walking, he noticed a little boy picking up the starfish one by one and throwing them into the ocean. Then he went over and asked the boy, “What are you doing?” The boy replied, “I'm throwing starfish back into the water. If I leave them here, they’ll dry up and die.” The man said, “But look how many starfish there are. What you’re doing can’t possibly make a great difference to all of them.” As the boy picked up another starfish and threw it into the ocean, he said, “Well, it makes a difference to this one!” Then he added, “Though I can’t save all of them, I can make some of them survive with my efforts.”
Moved by the lovely and warm-hearted boy, the man bent down to pick up the struggling starfish and threw them into water. Every time he threw the starfish into the water, he felt their fate was changing.[来源:学+科+网]
【写作内容】
1、以约30个词概括短文的内容要点。
2、然后以约120个词就 “施助于人”的主题发表看法,内容包括:
(1)你如何评价故事中小男孩?
(2)叙述一次你真实或虚构的“施助于人”的经历。
(3)呼吁大家积极参与“施助于人”的活动。
【写作要求】
1、作文中可以使用实例来支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容论述,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

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