Question

文中共有10处语言错误，

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

              2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something.

Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber café near our

school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing

computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even talking about love

affairs online. On my opinion, the cyber cafe should be a place which we can find

much useful informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather

than place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of them. Otherwise, it will give us great harm. So the local government should take measures to make sure that

students use cyber cafes positively.

Answer 1

改错：I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something.

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Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber café near our

school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing

                   去掉               surprised

computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even talking about love

                             chatting

affairs online. On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much

            In                                   where

useful informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than 

      information

^  place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of them. Otherwise, it

a                                                   it

will give us great harm. So the local government should take measures to make sure

   do

that students use cyber cafes positively.