题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。美国交流生Tom即将离开你校回国,离别之际,你送了一个小礼物给他,并附一张卡片。请在卡片上写以下内容:
1. 礼物是什么?(比如国画、茶、剪纸等);
2. 礼物的意义(至少两点);
3. 祝福。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:国画 Chinese painting 剪纸 paper cutting
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
As you are leaving for your country,I'vepreparedagift--aChinesepainting named 'bamboo', whichI speciallydrewforyou.
In Chinese culture, bamboo means a lot. On one hand, it stands straight and stays green all year round so it's always full of life. I wish you as strong and energetic as a bamboo. On the other hand, it's hard outside but hollow inside, symbolizing a strong will and modesty. Generally speaking, bamboo is used to represent a noble and gentle person in Chinese.
I do hope that you enjoy the gift and wish you a pleasant journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生在送给美国交流生Tom的小礼物的卡片上写上礼物的名字和意义。
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 礼物是什么
2. 礼物的意义
3. 祝福
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
leave for/ mean/ stand straight/ all year round/ be full of/ as…as…/ symbolize/ modest/ stand for/ represent
第三步:连词成句
1. As you are leaving for your country, I've prepared a gift--a Chinese painting named 'bamboo', which I specially drew for you.
2. In Chinese culture, bamboo means a lot.
3. On one hand, it stands straight and stays green all year round so it's always full of life.
4. I wish you as strong and energetic as a bamboo.
5. On the other hand, it's hard outside but hollow inside, symbolizing a strong will and modesty.
6. Generally speaking, bamboo is used to represent a noble and gentle person in Chinese.
7. I really hope that you enjoy the gift and may you have a pleasant journey.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)