题目内容
近期，你校学生会以“高中生该不该参加秋游”为题，在你校展开了调查。请你根据下表的信息，以“Should Senior Students Go Autumn Outing”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，描述此次调查结果并发表你的观点。
One possible version：
In the past few days , the Students’ Union has carried out a survey with the title of “Should Senior Students Go Autumn Outing “. Here is the result .
60% of the students hold the opinion that students should go autumn outing .For one thing , it is a good chance for students to get close to nature where they can breathe in fresh air, which is definitely good for health .For another, students are those who carry a lot of pressure because of so much school work .Going autumn outing can be treated as a time for students to relax themselves , as a result , they are able to study in a better way .
However , the rest say no to going autumn outing .Firstly , they don’t think students have mood for enjoying the activity because of heavy school work .Secondly , going autumn outing will take up a lot of time , which students could spend on study .
Personally speaking , students will benefit a lot from going autumn outing .First of all , school is not the only place where students can learn .As we all know , they can learn more by dealing with each other and joining in activities .Next , students are having a stressful life every day , so they need some time to relax and have fun , or they will find it hard to keep going .
【解析】
试题分析：本文要求以“Should Senior Students Go Autumn Outing”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，描述该项调查结果并发表自己的观点。成文时应该：1. 首先介绍写作背景，即展开调查的情况；2.正文部分介绍调查的结果，并且介绍支持方和反对方各自的理由；3.发表自己的看法和观点。4.写作时为了语言的连贯应该恰当使用连接词和插入语；5.注意高级词汇和句式的使用。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达结构清晰，段落分明。文中使用了表示层次的连接词For one thing , For another，first of all , Next , Firstly , Secondly等；表示因果关系的 as a result ,表示总结的personally speaking , 表示转折关系的however等，这些连词的使用使文章内容连贯性强。而且定语从句which students could spend on study .并列句so they need some time to relax and have fun , or they will find it hard to keep going .等的使用也是文章的一个亮点。
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