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请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
No matter how bad things get, something good is out there, just over the horizon.
注意: 1. 无须写标题;
2. 不得透露个人信息和学校名称;
3. 词数120 左右。


Life is like a spice, where you can taste all sorts of flavour. You can not only experience happiness but also bitterness. Whatever life has given you or you have experienced, believe life is wonderful. Even though you may get frustrated, don’t lose heart. Work hard, deal with the problems and try again, you will see something beautiful before you. It’s just like a rainy day when sometimes we feel annoyed, but we are always looking forward to the fresh air or a colourful rainbow when the rain stops. We should be grateful because we have benefited a lot from life itself. So love life and believe in yourself. There is no doubt that something nice is out there, maybe just over the horizon.

解析试题分析:考查开放性作文。开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】范文有很多高级的词组:not only …. but also“不但…而且…”, lose heart灰心,looking forward to 渴望,believe in 信任,文章还使用了一些好的句型:Life is like a spice, where you can taste all sorts of flavour. 这句话用了定语从句,Whatever life has given you or you have experienced, believe life is wonderful. 这句话用了让步状语从句, There is no doubt that something nice is out there, maybe just over the horizon.这句话用了固定句型。
考点:考查开放式作文

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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英文短文。
Every morning, on his way to work, Mike passed an old man who was always at the same place with a cup in his hand hoping to get a bit of change from those who passed by. For most people, this person was someone to be ignored as if he didn’t exist, someone who they didn’t want to be bothered with. However, Mike would always say good morning to him and wish him a nice day and sometimes would drop a dollar or two in his cup. This behavior went on for several years until one day before retirement.
He told the man that he would no longer pass by because it was his last day on the job. The man took his hand and shook it warmly saying that he had always looked forward to seeing Mike not because he dropped a few dollars in his cup. He said he would miss him because he was one of the few people who said hello and bid him good day. The man also said that his warm words always brightened his day and helped him to continue.
We all have the power of words and we often do not recognize that some can be devastating(毁灭性的) while some can be encouraging.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容;
2. 然后以约120个词就言语的力量的话题发表你的看法,并包括以下要点:
(1)你对上文中Mike的做法持什么看法;
(2)谈谈日常生活中言语的力量;
(3)以你或他人的经历举例论证言语的力量。
【写作要求】
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

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