Question

【题目】假定你是李华，打算下个月到伦敦参加一个英语口语培训班。请给曾经在你校留学的伦敦学生Eric发一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.伦敦之行的目的；

2.邀请Eric重聚；

3.表达感谢与期望。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Eric,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric,

We haven’t seen each other since you returned to your country two years ago. I’m delighted to tell you that I’ll go to your city to attend a training class for spoken English next month and I want to call on you.

According to the schedule, I will stay in London for only seven days. I would appreciate it very much if you could spare time to meet me at your convenience. I think that we will have a lot to share with each other.

Thank you in advance for your kindness. I’m looking forward to meeting you in London soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向曾经在本校留学的校友Eric告知伦敦之行并邀请重聚。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：三段式结构。第一段告知伦敦之行；第二段提出重聚邀请；第三段表达感谢和期望。

要求：1. 告知伦敦之行（attend a training class for spoken English next month）

2. 提出重聚邀请

1）时间安排（According to the schedule, I will stay in London for only seven days.）

2）提出邀请（spare time to meet me at your convenience）

3. 表达感谢和期望（I’m looking forward to meeting you in London soon.）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

return to; be delighted to do; call on sb.; according to; spare time to do; at your convenience; share with; in advance; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. We haven’t seen each other since you returned to your country two years ago.

2. I’m delighted to tell you that I’ll go to your city to attend a training class for spoken English next month and I want to call on you.

3. According to the schedule, I will stay in London for only seven days.

4. I would appreciate it very much if you could spare time to meet me at your convenience.

5. I think that we will have a lot to share with each other.

6. Thank you in advance for your kindness.

7. I’m looking forward to meeting you in London soon.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改