Question

假定你是高三学生李华，看到同学们互赠纸质新年贺卡，认为这会造成浪费和污染。请你根据下列要点写一篇100词左右的英语短文向校英语报投稿，建议大家使用电子贺卡（e-cards）。
1．方便快捷：电子邮件传送：      2．省钱：网站免费下载；
3．内容非富：可增加音乐动画：    4．环保：不会造成污染浪费。
参考词汇： 动画animation
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Answer 1

One possible version
New Year’s Day is drawing near and as usual many of my classmates begin to send paper cards to each other, friends and family. I think it is really a waste of money and it can also cause pollution. So I suggest using e-cards instead of paper-cards. First, it is very convenient to send e-cards. It just takes a click and our friends will receive them in one or two seconds. Second, free e-cards can help us save money. Third, with sound and animation, e-cards are more interesting and lively than paper cards. Last but not least, e-cards are environmentally friendly as no real materials are used. Since they have so many advantages, why not have a try?

试题分析：本文是一篇给出汉语提示的提纲类作文。成文时应注意以下几点：1、文章内容要齐全；（1）方便快捷：电子邮件传送；（2）省钱：网站免费下载；（3）内容非富：可增加音乐动画；（4）环保：不会造成污染浪费。2.时态：一般现在时；3.人称：一、三人称；4.适当使用一些高级词汇、句型和短语，以提高文章的档次；5.恰当使用一些连词和插入语使文章自然、流畅。
【范文亮点】1.使用了高级词汇：environmentally，短语Last but not least  2.高级句型：with sound and animation, e-cards are more interesting and lively than paper cards. it is very convenient to send e-cards