题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你班同学于5月1日组织了郊游活动,请你用英文写一篇日记。内容要点如下:
时间 | 地点 | 内容 |
7:30 | 校门口 | 集合,乘大巴出发 |
8:30 | 森林公园 | 爬山,寻宝(hunt for the hidden treasure),游湖 |
12:00 | 湖边空地 | 野餐,歌舞,游戏 |
15:00 | 停车场 (parking lot) | 返回 |
要求:
1层次清晰,表达连贯,使用适当的顺序词,如first, then, after that等;
2用适当的形容词、副词来描写景色、活动场面以及个人情感;
3词数100左右。
Friday May 1, 2015 Sunny
Our class went on an outing today.
【答案】Friday May 1, 2015Sunny Our class went on an outing today.
In the morning at 7:30, we gathered at the school gate and set off on a large bus. An hour later, we arrived at the Forest Park. Getting off, we started our journey at once.
First, we climbed the green hills and on the way tried our luck to hunt for the hidden treasure. Next, we toured around the lake on a comfortable boat. The beautiful scenery was really a feast for the eyes. Then by noon time, we landed and settled at an open area, where we enjoyed a wonderful picnic. After eating, we sang and danced happily and played some interesting games. The day passed quickly. Finally it was time for us to return. So at 3:00 pm, we cleaned the ground, made our way to the parking lot, got on the bus and left, laughing and shouting happily.
It was really an exciting trip since we had long been busy with our schoolwork.
【解析】根据文章提示和要求写一篇有关郊游的日记,学生应该感到有话可说,很易上手。学生须注意句子与句子,段落与段落之间的自然衔接。