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3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
   删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
   修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
   注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分；
     3．错误类型不涉及单词拼写．
Dear Brown，
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children．I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit to it．How about join us？The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river．It is so a beautiful place!We can hear birds singing happy all around．Everybody sleeps in tents，that is very exciting．You usually work only five hours a day，so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun．I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience．If you show much interests in it，reply to me soon．

Answer 1

分析 作者去年在国际儿童夏令营做了一份兼职工作，作者认为这项工作很有趣，是一次难忘的经历，所以当知道今年还需要一名工作人员时就写信给Brown，建议Brown加入．

解答 Dear Brown，
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children．I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit to it．How about join us？The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river．It is so a beautiful place!We can hear birds singing happy all around．Everybody sleeps in tents，thatis very exciting．You usually work only five hours a day，so we will have plenty of spare time∧visit the area and have a fun．I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience．If you show much interestsin it，reply to me soon．
详解：
1．take改为took；考查动词的时态，本文是记录过去发生的事情，故使用过去时．
2．to改为for；考虑介词，be fit for是固定短语，意为"适合…"
3．join改为joining；考查非谓语动词，about是介词，后面接动名词．
4．so改为such；考查语法知识，so后面接的是名词短语，所以用such．
5．happy改为happily；考查副词，此处用副词作形容词修饰动词．
6．that改为which；考查关系代词，分析句子可知这是非限制性定语从句，不能用that引导．
7．You改为We；考查人称代词，根据上下文可知是"我们通常…"，故用代词we．
8．visit前面加to；考查动词不定式，此处用不定式短语表示目的．
9．去掉a；考查冠词，fun是不可数名词，前面不能用不定冠词a．
10．interests改为interest；考查名词，interest作为"兴趣"讲是不可数名词，不能用复数形式．

点评 短文改错首先快速阅读短文，了解短文基本大意，确定文章的基本时态，再运用语法，词汇，习惯性短语等基础知识进一步分析各个句子，找出文中的错误加以修改．