Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter来信与你交流对音乐的看法以及你喜欢的音乐形式及原因。请你用英语给他回复一封邮件。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

I am very glad to have the chance to share my opinions about music and my favorite music with you.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am very glad to have the chance to share my opinions about music and my favorite music with you. Music plays an important role in our life. First, it can make us feel relaxed both mentally and physically, thus helping reduce our pressure at study. Second, it can excite and encourage us whenever we meet troubles. What’s more, music can have a comforting effect when we are worried and help us out of trouble. Besides, music can be of great help on the way to understanding other cultures.

I like both pop music and traditional music. Pop music can bring me both excitement and lovely tunes. Traditional music brings me different pleasures. It can show me the peaceful side of the world and can even tell me the true meaning of life.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter来信与你交流对音乐的看法以及你喜欢的音乐形式及原因。请你用英语给他回复一封邮件。要注意邮件的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: play an important role起到重要作用，What’s more另外。还使用了时间状语从句What’s more, music can have a comforting effect when we are worried and help us out of trouble.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。