Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 

    The long-desired winter vacation arrived in the end. As soon as the bell rang, announced the end of the class, we couldn’t wait to rush out of the classroom. Half an hour late, my good friend Li Ming and I were on the way back home. Such crowded was the bus we took that they had to stand. Thinking of the coming Spring Festival and the four-weeks stay with parents, we both felt exciting. All of a sudden, I saw a man picking an old lady’s pocket. With help of Li Ming, I caught the thief and force him to give back the purse to the lady. The thief was take away by the police. Praised by other passengers, and we felt proud of what we had done．

Answer 1

The long-desired winter vacation arrived in the end. As soon as the bell rang, announced the

                                                                  announcing

end of the class, we couldn’t wait to rush out of the classroom. Half an hour late, my good friend

                                                             later

Li Ming and I were on the way back home. Such crowded was the bus we took that they had to

                                   So                               we

stand. Thinking of the coming Spring Festival and the four-weeks stay with parents, we both felt

                                            four-week

exciting. All of a sudden, I saw a man picking an old lady’s pocket. With∧ help of Li Ming, I

excited                                                    the

caught the thief and force him to give back the purse to the lady. The thief was take away by the

                forced                                          taken

police. Praised by other passengers, and we felt proud of what we had done．