Question

My aunt lives in a village far from my town.
Last year she came to visit us brought me a	76．________________
little dog for my birthday present. It was a little black	77．________________
dog with white spots on. It was so lovely that I	78．________________
liked it at once. Every day after school I played the	79．________________
dog and it gave me much more pleasure. I was glad	80．________________
to have it as my company. One day the dog went away	81．________________
and never came back again. All my families were out searching	82．________________
for it but it was nowhere to found. How I worried	83．________________
about it all those days. A week later a letter came about	84．________________
my aunt saying that the little dog had returned	85．________________

Answer 1

  76．brought前加and，用and连接多个动词表示一连串动作。
  77．for改为as “作为生日礼物”。
  78．on后加it，“它身上有斑点”，on用作介词，如果用with sth. on则表示“穿着，（灯）亮着”等。
  79．played后加with，play with表示“与…嬉戏”。
  80．more删去，“给我乐趣”。
  81．away改为out，go out表示“出门，出去”，go away表示“走开”。
  82．families改为family，指“我”的家人。
  83．found前加be，用不定式被动态表示“没有被找到”。
  84．about改为from，指“我姨给我来了一封信”。
  85．√