Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你在上周日搭坐102号公交车，该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒。于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。要点如下：

1. 司机的不文明行为(大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等)。

2. 希望尽快查清此事。

注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua. I am writing to complain about one of your bus-drivers’ improper and rude behaviors.

Last Sunday, I was taking the No. 102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast. So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving, but he didn’t pay any attention. What’s worse, he drove even faster. Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind. But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance. However, he didn’t apologize but said rudely “It’s none of your business.”[

I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般将来时为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 注意语气。要注意语气应该比较恳切。难点是计划，一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。写这部分内容时，学生可以采取简单句和复合句结合的方法。

【范文亮点】：

文章开头先进行简要的自我介绍并说明来信意图，引出话题，简明扼要。第二段对事件的时间、地点、过程进行详细的说明。并采用高级句型（“Last Sunday, I was taking the No. 102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast.”限制性定语从句）以及固定句式（“he didn’t apologize but said rudely”。not...but...不是……而是……）。也运用了complain about、What’s worse、However、sincerely等高级单词和短语让文章看起来更有料。文章结尾提出意见语气恳切。