Question

【题目】书面表达

学校将为高三学生举办一场英语沙龙。假如你是学生会主席李华，请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿，呼吁高三学生调节好学习和生活，保持良好的心态。

内容要点：

1．描述周围同学现状：熬夜多，运动少，学习效率不高。

2．提出至少两条建议。

注意：1．词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Good morning，everyone! It’s my honor to be here to make a short speech．

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That's all．Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone！It’s my honor to be here to make a short speech.

Recently I have found that some of our classmates can’t study efficiently. Some can’t help falling asleep in class, because they often study too late into the night. Others seldom have sports, which surely does harm to their health.

As we know, enough sleep is of great importance for us senior 3 students. We can concentrate our mind in class with sufficient sleep, so we should try to make wise use of our time, striking a balance between work and leisure. Besides, doing proper exercise every day can benefit us a lot, keeping fit, reducing stress and so on. Let’s spare some time to do all kinds of sports. And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well.

That’s all. Thank you for listening!

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文写作，要点已给出；不要逐句翻译要点，适当增加细节以使文章更充实。

【亮点说明】It’s my honor to be here to make a short speech.it作形式主语，动词不定式短语做真正的主语；Recently I have found that some of our classmates can’t study efficiently.句中用宾语从句；Some can’t help falling asleep in class, because they often study too late into the night.原因状语从句在句中体现；Others seldom have sports, which surely does harm to their health. which引导非限制性定语从句；As we know, enough sleep is of great importance for us senior 3 students.as引导非限制性定语从句；so we should try to make wise use of our time, striking a balance between work and leisure.并列句和现在分词作结果状语在句中完美结合；doing proper exercise every day can benefit us a lot, keeping fit, reducing stress and so on.动名词短语作主语和作伴随状语；And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well.部分倒装堪称经典。