Question

16．假定你是李华，最近，你校正在举办以"和谐校园"为主题的英语文化节．为此，你们班将组织一次主题文化会，那么我们该如何做呢？请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对创建和谐校园的一些想法，内容包括"与人相处"和"校园环境"两个方面，每个方面至少应提出2条建议．
注意：1．词数不少于120词，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
2．短文内容需适当发挥，使行文连贯．
3．参考词汇：和谐 harmony； 和谐的harmonious
Dear fellow students，
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 Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Our school is aiming at building a harmonious school．I think it is everyone's duty to work hard to achieve this goal．
我们学校的目标是建设和谐学校．我认为努力实现这一目标是每个人的职责．
高分句型二：
At the same time，we should communicate with our parents regularly so that they can know what is happening in our school and what is in our mind．
同时，我们应该经常与父母沟通，这样他们就可以知道我们学校发生了什么，我们心里想的是什么．

解答 Dear fellow students，
Our school is aiming at building a harmonious school．I think it is everyone's duty to work hard to achieve this goal（高分句型一）．What should we do now？
First of all，we should be friendly to our classmates and try our best to help each other．Secondly，we should respect and trust our teachers and develop a pleasant relationship with them．At the same time，we should communicate with our parents regularly so that they can know what is happening in our school and what is in our mind（高分句型二）．Thirdly，I think，we should protect our environment and keep our school yard clean．We should take care of the equipment in the classroom and the plants in the school yard．Don't spit and throw rubbish everywhere．
Let's take action from now on．Let's work together to live in harmony．
Thank you．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．