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【题目】假设你叫李华，你的一位朋友John刚从国外归来，邀请你参加本周日在他家举办的朋友聚会，但你不能参加。请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件：

1. 忙于准备高考；

2. 身体不适；

3. 表示歉意并另约时间。

注意：1. 词数：100左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】Dear John，

Welcome back. It is very kind of you to invite me to your party to be held this Sunday. I’m afraid that I can’t make it. Therefore, I'm writing to extend my apology to you.

As you know, the College Entrance Exam is approaching and I am now really busy preparing for it. It is only with great effort that I will be admitted into my ideal college. What’s worse, having caught a bad cold lately，I am really not myself. Therefore , I have no choice but to stay at home for a few days until I recover.

I sincerely hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology. By the way , is it possible that we make another arrangement ? If so, please send me a reply about your preferable time. Wish you enjoy your time at the party.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封道歉信。

第一步：

审题：道歉信

人称：第一人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分表示道歉，第二部分说明不能参加聚会的原因，

第三部分再次表达歉意，希望能另约时间。

要点：

1. 表示道歉：不能参加John本周日在他家举办的朋友聚会

2．说明不能参加晚会的原因

①忙于准备高考：必须努力才能考上理想的大学

②身体不适：最近感冒了，要几天才能恢复

3．再次表达歉意，希望能另约时间

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

invite sb. to …； hold；make it；extend apology to sb.；approach；be busy doing…；prepare for；be admitted into；catch a bad cold；be oneself. ；have no choice but to do…；recover；make another arrangement

第三步：连词成句

(1)It is very kind of you to invite me to your party.

(2) The party will be held this Sunday.

(3)The College Entrance Exam is approaching.

(4)I am busy preparing for it.

(5) I will be admitted into my ideal college only with great effort.

(6) I have caught a bad cold lately.

(7) I am not myself.

(8) I have to stay at home for a few days until I recover.

(9)I hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology.

(10)Is it possible that we make another arrangement ?

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)

将第二个句子转换成不定式作定语，连接下面两个句子

(1)It is very kind of you to invite me to your party.

(2) The party will be held this Sunday.

→It is very kind of you to invite me to your party to be held this Sunday.

用多种句式表达“……即将来临”

(3)The College Entrance Exam is approaching.

→The College Entrance Exam is coming.

→The College Entrance Exam is on the way.

→The College Entrance Exam is just around the corner.

用强调句型表达下面的句子

(5) I will be admitted into my ideal college only with great effort.

→It is only with great effort that I will be admitted into my ideal college.

用分词作原因状语连接下面两个句子

(6) I have caught a bad cold lately.

(7) I am not myself.

→Having caught a bad cold lately, I am not myself.

用短语替换下句中的have to

(8) I have to stay at home for a few days until I recover.

→I have no choice but to stay at home for a few days until I recover.

→I have no alternative but to stay at home for a few days until I recover.

适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。

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