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4．假如你是一名大学生，名叫李华，你所在的班级最近就"大学生是否应经济独立"的话题展开讨论，同学们发表了不同的看法．请你根据以下内容，写一封信给某英语报社，反映讨论情况．
70%的同学的看法1．靠自己打工来支付学费会影响学业；
2．现在把精力都用在学习上，将来报答父母的养育之恩；
30%的同学的看法1．通过打工可以获得工作经验，了解社会；
2．体会父母挣钱不易，从而戒掉乱花钱的坏习惯；
你的看法…
注意：1．文章的起始句已给出；2．词数150左右（不包括起始句）．
Dear Editor，
I'm writing to tell you there is a heated discussion over whether or not university students should be financially independent．
                     
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一个提纲类的作文，根据表格提供的内容文章可写成三段或者四段式．第一段描述70%学生的看法，第二段30%学生的看法，第三段针对这种现状表达自己的观点和看法．要把提纲中的要点信心扩展成一个个完整的句子，然后根据文章的中心话题和要求，把这些要点连句成文．这是一个书信，用第一人称和一般现在时表达文章的内容．
亮点句型一：I'm writing to tell you there is a heated discussion over whether or not university students should be financially independent．我写信是想告诉你，关于大学生是否应该经济独立的问题进行了热烈的讨论．本句是一个复杂句，其中there is a heated discussion over whether or not university students should be financially independent是一个宾语从句，做tell的宾语；在这个宾语从句中whether or not university students should be financially independent是介词over的宾语从句．
亮点句型二：It is well known that opinions are divided on the question．众所周知，在这个问题上意见有分歧．这是一个主语从句，其中it是形式主语，that opinions are divided on the question 是真正的主语．
亮点句型三：They hold the idea that university students should be financially independent．他们认为大学生应该财政独立．这是一个同位语从句的句子，被解释的名词是idea，that university students should be financially independent是同位语从句．

解答 Dear Editor，
      I'm writing to tell you there is a heated discussion over whether or not university students should be financially independent．（亮点句型一）
      It is well known that opinions are divided on the question.70% of the students think that university students don't have to be financially independent．（亮点句型二）In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows：in the first place，trying to make money will affect their studies．Furthermore，in the second place，they think that they can repay their parents in the future by working hard now，so there is no need for students to take part-time jobs to earn money．【70%学生的看法】
      30% of the students，however，differ in their opinion on this matter．They hold the idea that university students should be financially independent．（亮点句型三）From their point of view，on one hand，doing part-time jobs will help one gain working experience and learn more of society．On the other hand，when students find it hard to make money，they won't waste their money any longer．【30%学生看法】
      As far as I am concerned，I partly agree with the opinions above．I think that as grownups，we should not depend on our parents any more．However，if our parents can afford to pay the tuition for us，we should put our studies in the first place．Thank you for reading my letter．【个人观点】
                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．