题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试(美国高考),心理压力很大,很苦恼,希望得到你的帮助。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1. 安慰对方;
2. 分析心理压力过大可能导致的后果;
3. 给出相应的建议及其理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test. Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress. But don’t worry too much, or you may find yourself having problems with sleep, appetite, or even memory. Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress.
The first thing you can try is to exercise. Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build up your confidence. Another way is to enjoy some games with friends, which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed. It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener; having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better.
I believe it will all work out. Cheer up! Let me know if I can help further.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文为提纲类作文。首先,学生要仔细阅读提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。其次,要注意提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后,要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信,按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构,三段式,其中第二部分是本文的主体,既要说安慰得到话,又要进行心理压力过大的分析以及可能会造成的后果,最后还要提出一些比较可行的建议及理由。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。宾语从句的使用:I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test.定语从句的使用:The first thing you can try is to exercise.非限制性定语从句的使用:……,which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed.