题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你校举办看图征文活动,题目为“How to protect your eyesight”。请你用英语写一篇短文,指出图中所反映的现象,并从阅读时间,光线,眼保健操及睡眠等方面,谈谈保护眼睛的具体做法.
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注意:
1.词数100-120字;
2.可适当加入细节,以便行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:近视-----near-sighted 眼保健操------eye exercise
How to protect our eyesight
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【答案】
One possible version:
How to Protect Our Eyesight
Now in schools, more and more students got near-sighted. As is shown in the picture, more than 80% of the students in our class wear glasses. And it’s not difficult to find the causes to this phenomenon.
Long time of studying in the classroom with no time to refresh our eyesight is one of the causes. I think poor light is also the cause because our eyes easily get tired in the poor light. In addition, lack of sleep also contributes to this result.
As far as I am concerned, measures should be taken to protect our eyesight. Firstly, students should be given more time to do some exercise to refresh ourselves. Secondly, learning conditions need to be improved, especially the poor light in the class room. Thirdly, doing eye exercises regularly every day is a great necessity. Besides, enough sleep also contributes to the improvement.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是说明文,内容包括:指出图中所反映的现象,并从阅读时间,光线,眼保健操及睡眠等方面,谈谈保护眼睛的具体做法。本文应该以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主;注意增加细节,使衔接合理,还要尽量用高中阶段学习词汇和句型。注意长短搭配。
【亮点说明】本文结构明确,思路清晰。分三段把内容要点都涵盖了。同时注意应用较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如As is shown in the picture,As far as I am concerned, contributes to还有较复杂的句子Long time of studying in the classroom with no time to refresh our eyesight is one of the causes.好人非谓语动词的用法等。并注意了句子的变化和衔接如In addition,Besides。