Question

【题目】请阅读下面的文字及图表，然后按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

【写作内容】

(1)用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

(2)综合上述信息，简要分析导致青少年近视的主要原因；

(3)根据你的分析，从学校规范和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点）。

【写作要求】

(1)写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

(2)作文中不能山现真实姓名和学校名称；

(3)不必写标题。

【评分标准]

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

More and more young people are getting nearsighted， which can be determined by some symptoms. The ever-increasing rate of nearsightedness in almost every school throughout China has become so alarming.

For many of young people, it is their routine to be buried in their books from morning till night while others often keep their eyes fixed on the computer or TV. Their eyes are burdened so heavily that they can hardly function normally in the end. What’s worse, every year quite some students cannot go to their ideal colleges or get their dream jobs owing to their poor eyesight.

Now it is time that schools took action to protect students’ eyesight by giving them lectures ensuring proper lighting in classrooms, and limiting their time of reading books or doing exercises, eye exercises included.

As for me, I will immediately try every possible means to prevent my eyesight from getting weak.

【解析】本文属于图表类作文，采用了“材料类—图形—提纲类”形式，综合考查考生阅读材料，识图和写作能力。材料分为三部分：可分三段来写，第一段按题目要求用约30个词简要概括写作材料的要点；第二段综合上述信息，简要分析导致青少年近视的主要原因；第三、四段根据你的分析，从学校规范和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点）。

亮点分析：本文第一段用30个词概括了所给的材料，使了第一个非限制性定语从句，which can be determined by some symptoms.让文章结构有了层次感。在第二段分析了导致青少年近视的原因。在本段中运用了while引导的状语从句： For many of young people… till night while others often keep …computer or TV. 以及由so…that…引导的状语从句：Their eyes are burdened so heavily that they can hardly function normally in the end.再用一个连词“What’s worse”引出第三个原因。衔接词的恰当使用使该段条理清晰。第三段句型多样，条理清晰。最后两段从学校及个人行为两方面对个人的启示。在本段中运用了由It’s time that引导的虚拟语气：Now it is time that schools took action to protect students’ eyesight by giving them lectures。及非谓语 ensuring proper lighting in classrooms, and limiting their time of reading。这些句式给文章增色许多。