题目内容
假如你叫李华,今年暑假即将跨入高三的学习,压力很大,想和父母说说心里话,请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下:
知心话 | 感恩 | 感谢父母的关心、鼓励 |
对父母的期望 | 1. 多加交流 2. 适时提供帮助 | |
学习打算 | 考生自拟(至少写两点) | |
注意:1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥。
2. 词数:120左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入词数)。
Dear Mom and Dad,
With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!
Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Mom and Dad,
With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!
During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies.
Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I'm under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state.
I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success.Just as the saying goes,"no pains, no gains." Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies.
Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文的属于提纲类写作,要求对父母说说心里话,话题切合考生实际,与考生的生活非常贴近,考生有话可说,有很强的可写性。要点是以提纲的形式给出的,要求考生有较强的整合能力,在写作时充分利用连接词,高级句型和词汇,如果可能在文章结尾运用谚语,以使文章的层次更高。应该用合适的连接词,可以适当使用高级的句式和高级的词汇来给文章增色。在例举学习打算的时候可以加入谚语,让文章更上一层楼。
【亮点说明】范文使用了很多词组:Thanks to 多亏,making remarkable progress 取得很大的进步,made up my mind to 决定,make every effort to study努力学习, the key to…的关键。 还使用了不少精典句式,如: Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I'm under great pressure now. 这句话使用了固定句型,I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state.这句话使用了it做形式宾语和which引导的定语从句,I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering.这句话使用了定语从句, Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies这句话使用了现在分词做状语。文章还恰当地使用了俗语:Just as the saying goes,"no pains, no gains."。
考点: 考查提纲类书面表达