Question

一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
写作要点：   1.它是中国的传统节日之一；
2.家人团聚；
3.赏月，吃月饼；
4.还有旅游，访友等其他活动。
注意： 1.  词数100 左右；
2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3． 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：中秋节the Mid-Autumn Festival  农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon        月饼 moon cake
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15^th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.   

Answer 1

One possible version：
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15^th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.
As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful noon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.

解析试题分析：本篇书面表达要求介绍中秋节以及在这个节日里的主要活动。要点较多，在写作时注意不要遗漏要点，同时还需要对要点进行细节上的补充，以使文章内容丰富，上下衔接。其次，因为是对传统节日、风俗习惯的介绍，所以在时态选择上要使用一般现在时态。此外，本文属于说明文范畴，要注意语言简练、用词准确。
【亮点说明】本篇范文结构紧凑，要点全面。文中运用了大量的短语，比如As one of the traditional Chinese festivals；With the beautiful noon up in the sky sharing our stories；In addition to these traditional activities, 这样不但避免了长句的繁冗晦涩，使得文章语言简练易懂，而且又起到很好的连接上下文的作用，使文章读起来自然流畅，朗朗上口。
考点：考查提纲作文。