Question

【题目】假定你是李华。你收到了美国笔友彼得寄来的最新英文小说。请给他回信，内容包括：

1.小说收到；

2.回赠礼物；

3.礼物意义；

4.邀请来华。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive the novel.Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life.

I know you’re interested in Chinese festivals,and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you.Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics,which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere.I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China.

Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇是提纲类作文书面表达。内容是给美国笔友写一封回信。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4、注意写信格式。

【亮点说明】本文层次分明，结构紧凑，语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。如定语从句aper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics,which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere宾语从句I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China.等