题目内容
4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Jack,
I met you during you were visiting Beijing in this June.Before you returned to your country there was farewell party for you visitors at the Youth Palace.We each brought a notebook along.At the party I was seat next to you.Lucky,when the party was over,we took the notebooks by mistakes.I took yours and you took mine.I didn't know this when I looked through the notebook.I found your name and address in it.I'm now send your notebook to you.Please post your notebook to me when you received the letter.Thank you.
yours truly,
Li Hua.
分析 作者与Jack在北京的一次聚会上拿错了笔记本,这里作者写信给Jack告诉他把他的笔记本寄回去,同时请求Jack把自己的也给寄回来.
解答 Dear Jack,
I met you during you were visiting Beijing in this June.Before you returned to your country there was∧farewell party for you visitors at the Youth Palace.We each brought a notebook along.At the party I was seat next to you.Lucky,when the party was over,we took the notebooks by mistakes.I took yours and you took mine.I didn't know this when I looked through the notebook.I found your name and address in it.I'm now send your notebook to you.Please post your notebook to me when you received the letter.Thank you.
yours truly,
Li Hua.
详解:
1.during改为when/while;考查时间状语从句,when,while意为"当…",都引导时间状语从句,during表示"在…期间",后面接名词.
2.去掉in;考查介词,表示时间的名词前面有this,that,next,last等修饰时,前面不能加介词.
3.farewell party前面加a;考查冠词,party是可数名词的单数形式,前面加a泛指一个.
4.seat改为seated;考查动词,seat是及物动词,意为"使…就坐",一般用法为be seated,故把seat改为seated.
5.Lucky改为Unluckily;考查副词,此处用副词形式作状语修饰整个句子,分析句意为"不幸的是我们拿错了笔记本",故答案为Unluckily.
6.mistake改为mistakes;考查固定搭配,by mistake是固定搭配,意为"错误地,无意地".
7.when改为until;考查固定结构,此处用until与前面的not构成"not…until…"结构,意为"直到…才".
8.send改为sending;考查动词的时态,此处用现在分词形式sending与前面的I'm构成现在进行时.
9.your改为my;考查形容词性物主代词,分析句意为"请把我的笔记本寄过来",故用my.
10.received改为receive;考查动词的时态,句意为"当你收到信请把我的笔记本寄过来",此处用一般现在时,表示请求.
点评 首先要通读全文,整体理解短文的中心思想,然后根据短文讲述的事情确定文章的基本时态,再运用基础语言知识从时态,语态,句式结构,固定短语等方面彻底进行分析,以便尽快找出短文的错误加以修改.