Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack对中国的铁路很感兴趣，想乘坐火车旅行。请根据以下要点提示，写一封书信，介绍中国铁路系统。

1.火车类型：髙铁(HSR)(G)(300 km/h)；

动车(CRH)(D)(200 km/h)；

快车(Express)(T/Z/K)(100 km/h)；

2.火车优点：安全，可以观赏沿途风景，省钱。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m honoured that you show great interest in our trains.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m honoured that you show great interest in our trains. Now we have three kinds of trains. The traditional one is the express train, which is slow but cheap, with letter K/T/Z marked on the ticket. Another one is CRH, running at the speed of 200 kilometers per hour, and you can see letter D on the ticket. However, the fastest train is HSR traveling up to 300 kilometers per hour. Their tickets are marked with letter G.

Traveling by train is safe over a long distance. Besides, you can see the beautiful scenery along the railway. It won’t cost you too much.

Looking forward to your visit to China!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节。认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇书信，格式正确，内容齐全，句子衔接紧密，文中使用高级句子。I’m honoured that you show great interest in our trains.ｔｈａｔ引导宾语从句；The traditional one is the express train, which is slow but cheap,ｗｈｉｃｈ引导非限制性定语从句；with letter K/T/Z marked on the ticket.ｗｉｔｈ的独立结构；Traveling by train is safe over a long distance.动名词做主语；另外，However, Besides,等的运用为文章增色添彩。