Question

【题目】微信朋友圈已经成为非常受欢迎的社交平台。最近你班针对“是否父母应该被允许看你的微信朋友圈”这一话题开展讨论，大家发表了不同的看法。请根据下面所给内容，反映讨论情况并表达自己的观点。

不同观点	理由
30%支持	1、青少年缺乏社会经验，需要父母的指导。 2、不允许父母参与，可以使代沟越来越来大，而允许父母参与微信朋友圈可以帮助父母与子女沟通并且使关系更加亲近。
70%反对	1、每个人需要隐私，假如父母允许父母看， 我们将没有自己的密秘。 2、微信朋友圈是我们和同龄朋友交流平台，如果允许父母看我们微信圈，我们将无法自由的和朋友由分享我们的想法。
你的观点	发表你自己的看法并说明原因。（不少于两点原因）

注意：1. 词数150左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数

2.参考词汇：微信朋友圈 the Moments of WeChat 参与involvement 隐私 privacy 代沟generation gap

Recently our class held a heated discussion about whether our parents should be allowed to see our Moments of Wechat.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently our class held a heated discussion about whether our parents should be allowed to see our Moments.

There are 30% of the students who are for it. the reasons are as follows: Firstly, as teenagers, we need our parents’ guidance especially in terms of social experience. Secondly, Without parents’ involvement, the generation gap between our parents and us may tend to become bigger and bigger. Instead, parents’ involvement can lead to better communication and a closer relationship between parents and children.

However, 70% of the students argue against it. For one thing, we hold the view that everyone needs some privacy. If parents are allowed to see our Moments, we won’t have our own secrets. For another thing, the Moments of WeChat is mainly a way of communicating with friends of our own age. If our parents are allowed to see it, we can’t share our thoughts with our friends freely.

In my opinion, it is meaningful to let parents see our Moments, which makes them happy and stops them from worrying about me. Besides, our parents feel like seeing our Moments, which shows their care and love for us.

【解析】试题分析：最近你班针对“是否父母应该被允许看你的微信朋友圈”这一话题开展讨论，并发表了不同的看法。根据所给内容，反映讨论情况并表达自己的观点。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

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