Question

【题目】【来源】北京市中央民族大学附属中学2017届高三2月月考

假设你是某所中学的学生，鉴于世界很多地方水资源匮乏和世界水日的到来，你班开展了一系列节水宣传活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以日记的形式记录当天的活动内容。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：宣传材料leaflets；危机crisis

March 6,2017 Monday Sunny

Answer 1

【答案】

March 22, 2017 Monday Sunny

Today is World Water Day. In the morning, we had a class meeting talking about what to do on this special day. Finally, we reached an agreement and immediately began to make preparations for the afternoon's activities. At 2:00 p.m., we went to the neighboring community to hand out leaflets,calling on people to save water. Around 3 0'clock, the expert we invited made an excellent speech on the current water crisis in China. He talked about the draught in the southeast and the severe shortage of water in our city. The speech had a strong appeal to all the people present including me.

After the speech, we had a discussion with our neighbors about various ways of saving water in our daily life. I suggested turning off the tap water immediately after use, and a granny came up with the ideas of reusing the water from kitchen, for example, the water after washing fruits and vegetables can be used to water flowers and so on.

Today, I have had a better understanding of the importance of saving water and really learned a lot about saving water.

【解析】第一篇作文为提纲类作文。第一要注意倡议书的格式。第二要注意要点齐全： 1）垃圾分类的做法；2）垃圾分类的益处；3）呼吁全体学生一起参加；人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。

第二篇作文为图画类作文。注意日记的格式，人称用第一人称，时态用一般过去时。注意审题，要点要全。

【亮点说明】第一篇作文条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯，运用了高级句子，如非限制性定语从句：Paper can be recycled, while leftovers can be collected as food for pigs or processed as fertilizer for plants.；高级词汇：如above all, of great benefit等也为文章增色添彩。

第二篇作文描写生动，详略得当，层次分明，运用了高级句子，如定语从句the expert we invited made an excellent speech on the current water crisis in China.等；高级词汇finally, had a better understanding of等的运用也为文章增色添彩。