Question

【题目】短文写作（共1题；满分30分）

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

“Anyone who has never made a mistake has never tried anything new.” －Albert Einstein.

注意：

①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

④词数不少于120词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Everyone must have made mistakes, from which they gain experiences and learn new things. However, many people are afraid of making mistakes.

Actually we all make mistakes when trying something new. I still remember the first time I cooked dumplings when my mother and my father went on holiday. I poured a bag of dumplings into the pot when the water was boiling, and then I put the lid on the pot. After a while I found all the dumplings stuck to the bottom. When I stirred them hard, I found all the dumplings broken. Later, my mother told me I should have stirred them as soon as I put dumplings into the boiling water.

My experience teaches me I will never learn new things unless I try. So we should not be afraid of making mistakes because making mistakes is part of our life.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据所给提示并结合事例写一篇短文。所给的提示是爱因斯坦的名言“一个从未犯过错误的人，也从未曾尝试过新的事物。”从提示中可以看出，写作时应该强调“勇于尝试、不怕犯错”的精神。注意还要结合自己的事例。多使用一些高级词汇和短语、定语从句、非谓语动词、虚拟语气、名词性从句等知识，还要注意上下文的衔接、连贯。

亮点说明：

范文注意使用However, Actually, and then, After a while, Later, So等来衔接前后句，使作文显得紧凑；

范文使用了情态动词表推测和虚拟语气must have made mistakes，should have stirred them；定语从句from which they gain experiences；时间状语从句when my mother and my father went on holiday，as soon as I put dumplings into the boiling water；条件状语从句unless I try；原因状语从句because making mistakes is part of our life等，使作文句式长短结合，作文变得生动、丰富。