Question

你最好的朋友Jack最近迷上电脑，因此常常熬夜，疏忽课业，并受到父母的指责。你打算写一封信给他,适当地给予劝告。
注意：⒈ 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；  
2. 可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
⒊ 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。
Dear Jack,
How have you been recently?______________________________________________________           __  
                                                                                         
____________________________________________________________________________________         
                                                               
____________________________________________________________________________________         
                                                                
Sincerely Yours,
Jill

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
How have you been recently? I know that you have gotten so addicted to video games that you often stay up late and ignore your studies. As your best friend, I believe that I have the responsibility to give you some advice.
As you might have discovered, video games can have quite a few negative impacts on your life. First, lacking sleep, you may often nod off in class. Therefore, you may not be able to concentrate on what the teacher is saying. You may have found yourself falling behind and having a hard time catching up in your studies. In addition, it seems that you have become a mouse potato and forgotten the benefits of playing sports.
I really miss the happy times with you on the basketball court, and you do need some exercise. Please do not indulge yourself in video games anymore. How about meeting in the park this Sunday? I look forward to your reply!
Sincerely Yours,
Jill

解析试题分析：本书面表达是要求学生写一封书信，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态。注意本文是一封劝告信，故多用第二人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如addict to，stay up late，have the responsibility to do，have negative impacts on, nod off.，concentrate on，catch up，look forward to还运用句型so … that …引导的结果状语从句，what引导的宾语从句，非谓语动词作宾语补足语，it seems that …等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：first，therefore，in addition, 等等。
考点：书信类作文