Question

【题目】假定你是李华，暑假打算去纽约旅游一周，请你用英语给你的美国网友Jack写一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1. 此行的目的；

2. 你的请求。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

To have a better understanding of the United States of America and have a closes experience of its history and diverse cultures, I’m going to New York for a one-week-long trip during the coming summer holiday. Since this is my first trip to America, could you please recommend some typical tourist attractions to me? If it i convenient for you, would you please book a room at a hotel right in downtown New York for me? By the way, could you be kind enough to be my tourist guide when you are free?

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：暑假打算去纽约旅游一周，请你用英语给你的美国网友Jack写一封电子邮件。内容包括： 此行的目的；你的请求。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：have a better understanding of（有一个更好的理解）；diverse cultures,（多样性文化）；some typical tourist attractions（一些典型的旅游景点）；book a room（预定一个房间）等

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封电子邮件，格式正确，内容齐全，文章结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。To have a better understanding of the United States of America and have a closes experience of its history and diverse cultures,此处是动词不定式做目的状语；Since this is my first trip to America, could you please recommend some typical tourist attractions to me?句中since引导原因状语从句，且和问句完美结合；could you be kind enough to be my tourist guide when you are free?句中when引导时间状语从句。