题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的加拿大笔友Allen来信说近期要来体验北京特色文化,希望你提些建议。请根据以下提示写一封回信。
信件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
·visit the old royal houses in the Forbidden City
·see Chinese painting in the National Art Gallery
·drink Chinese tea in Laoshe Tea House
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Dear Allen,
I’m so happy to hear you’re coming to experience the local culture in Beijing. I’d like to introduce what you can enjoy here.
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Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Allen,
I’m so happy to hear you’re coming to experience the local culture in Beijing. I’d like to introduce what you can enjoy here.
You may go to the Forbidden City. There you will visit the old royal houses and learn about the civilizations of Ming and Qing dynasties. It’s also worthwhile to visit the National Art Gallery, where you can see Chinese painting, calligraphy and sculptures. Drinking some Chinese tea in Laoshe Tea House is also an interesting experience. You may relax and chat with the local people. If you want to enjoy Beijing Opera, Mei Lanfang Opera House is your best chance. The music, dancing, martial arts and costumes are the best part of Chinese culture.
Please let me know if you need more information.
Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇作文属于应用文写作――建议信。
建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。信的内容要包括写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。写建议信要注意以下几点:
1.信件的基本格式。
①信头 (heading),写信人的姓名和地址要写在右上角,收信人的姓名和地址要写在左上角。
②称呼 (salutation),即对收信人的称呼,一般用Dear / My dear ...。
③正文 (body),即信件的主要内容。
④信尾客套语 (complimentary close),写信人在信的右(或左)下角,写上表示自己对收信人一种礼貌客气的谦称,一般有Sincerely yours, Yours sincerely, Yours truly, Yours等。
⑤信尾签名 (signature),在信末写上写信人的姓名,如:Li Hua。
2.建议信的特点。简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
3.明确写作意图。简要陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。
例如本篇作文开门见山“I’d like to introduce what you can enjoy here.”
4.写作技巧。针对具体情况提出善意的建议。
5.总结建议。对自己提出的所有建议,简要地作个小结。
常用表达
本文的亮点:
本篇作文结构完整,要点齐全,简明扼要,目的明确,具有说服力,语气大方得体。能使用一些复合句和较高级词汇等。
在文章中使用的复合句有:
定语从句“It’s also worthwhile to visit the National Art Gallery, where you can see Chinese painting, calligraphy and sculptures”
状语从句:If you want to enjoy Beijing Opera. Mei Lanfang Opera House is your best
If you want to enjoy Beijing Opera. Mei Lanfang Opera House is your best chance.
非谓语中的动名词作主语:Drinking some Chinese tea in Laoshe Tea House is also an interesting experience.
例如本作文中使用一些固定句式:It’s also worthwhile to visit …chance.
使用了一些连词,让句子条理清晰。
【题目】报纸和网站是当今两大主要媒体。请根据下列内容,以“Newspapers and Websites”为题,用英语写一篇短文,简要介绍这两种媒体的优缺点。
报 纸 | 网 站 |
①传统媒体,天天更新,信息可靠 | ①新兴媒体,信息更新速度快 |
注意:1)短文必须包括上述所有内容,可以适当发挥;
2)词数:100左右
3)参考词汇:更新update;音频audio;视频video